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2008-06-23 09:23:47

Last author: Your Brompton Cocktail
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           [The Day After]

           [ Part One ]


Brier was sitting there in his room, reading waiting for her to call. They had had a rough week, he had thought she was mad, she was actually rethinking them. he couldn't think why. why wouldn't Demitra be happy? Brier had talked to her, she said there wasn’t anyone else, she just said it was because he was her first lover, and she didn't know anything but him. Which made him wonder because she was all he knew. Brier slapped himself in the forehead "I can't think about it now, it's done she said she wasn’t leaving me and she is coming over today!" He smiled he wanted to touch her, to feel her skin like it was the first time he had. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever met and all his! He looked at the clock. "Shit! she'll be here in 10 minutes!" brier ran down to the shower and tore off his clothes, got in the shower and turn on the water. "fuck that’s cold," Then five minutes into his shower, he was still washing his hair and he heard a nock at the door
"Shit...HOLD ON!" Brier finished rinsing his hair and turned off the water, got out, and put a towel on. "ehh whatever!" he said opening the door. He walked out into the living room and opened the door. The cold winter air hit his wet body and he Gasped, but he didn’t only gasp because it was freezing… there was Demitra standing in the door wearing what looked like her Japanese school girl outfit. It was this sexy white top with a black tie and a skimpy short skirt. “Are you going to let me in or stare at me?” said Demitra smiling at what he was wearing. “oh! Sorry babe” he said opening the door and letting her in, closing it behind her. “Sorry ‘bout the towel I just got out of the shower”
She grinned at him, “oh no it’s ok, I don’t mind”
He looked at her and smiled. “hey why are you grinning? I thought it was me who was always horny!”
She laughed “well silly I can be too can't I?” “oh yes you can!” he thought but he didn’t say it he just sat on the couch, once again forgetting he was in only a towel, and when she blushed at him he looked down and realized his flaccid cock was showing. He laughed but the entire time he was looking all about her. His gaze went to her nails, he almost gasped out loud “she filed them to the points again!” he thought. Demitra sat down beside him putting her bag down and looked him in the eyes “so… what do you want to do?” she said smiling. “well I know I’m always cheesy in a sexual situation but...” and he leaned over and gave her the biggest hug he ever had, when he pulled back he locked In a very passionate kiss letting her tongue dance on his. They hadn’t seen each other in a week and a half and she was the best kisser he had ever met! They kissed deeper and deeper when finally her hands started to wander… down his chest, over his nipple pinching it a little. “they seem to be a bit hard...” said Demitra as she smiled “well it was cold when I opened the door” he said “well I should warm them up” said Demitra as she started to lick his nipple. He gasped as he felt her warm tongue go over his nipple and his cock started to get rock hard. He moaned “ohh wow…” Demitra smiled and started to rub his cock. Brier gasped feeling her cold soft hands touch his cock and start to stroke it ”yess” Brier said laying back and letting it happen, Demitra then proceeded to tear off the towel he was wearing and leaned down and started to lick his cock. Licking the head and stroking it nice and slow.” want me to continue?” said Demitra “baby…do you even have to ask?" brier smiled. Demitra then licked the bottom of his cock, flicking her tongue as she went. She smiled at brier “guess what?” she said Oh god … what?” brier moaned, Demitra started to caress his balls and then plunged his rock hard cock deep into her mouth “YES!” brier almost screamed” and Demitra started going faster and moaning letting her throat vibrate as much as she could so that it would tease the head of Briers cock” god you are so good at this!” he said as she started to go faster and faster and moaning louder and louder, sucking harder until she knew he was going to come soon. she looked at him and he winked. he knew why she was looking at him and yes he had eaten the chocolates she had given him, and as he started to moan louder and louder so did Demitra until she finally squeezed hiss balls and started to suck every last bit of cum out of him “this is so good its been so long!!” he said Demitra smile when she was finally done and laid on top of Brier “so ..we going upstarts when you rest up?”
Brier just smiled…”maybe”

2007-11-30 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: read and comment plzz

2007-12-03 [Lady Di]: i'm taking off the password since other people can't see it. it will still be editable by only you, however, so no one will mess with your story

2007-12-03 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: lol i didn't mean to do that lol

2007-12-03 [Lady Di]: s'all good, i've done it before too

2007-12-04 [Rushuna]: May I make a suggestion? Its a good story, but everything runs together.. The parts where Brier is thinking, shouldn't be in quotations. And the conversation between Brier and Demitra should flow better. Look at one of my stories and see how the conversation parts are... I think that might help^^
But like I said, its a good start and I can't wait for the next part to come out^^

2007-12-04 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: yah it was a real life story that hadnt happened yet but now has lol ( she was coming over and i had been dreaming about it ) ok i will try with part two

2007-12-04 [Rushuna]: I see. That's cool.. all of my stories are real too.. Well aside from Just A Dream Anyways.. but that's kinda self explanatory, lol
Ok^^ Good luck^^

2008-11-23 [Dreams of a savage nature]: wow....

2008-11-23 [Your Brompton Cocktail]: *smiles* if you like that check out the night after people say its mutch mutch better!

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